The official novelization of the first chapter of the manga Viewfinder by Yamane Ayano, originally released as a short story in B-Boy Phoenix in 2007. Only the first chapter of the manga was ever adapted into prose.
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A couple of things. I had noticed that you used the word ” cutted” when Ortashia was swinging her sword. The word should have been just ” cut”. Cut is still past tense. The second thing was when Ortashia said to Grotts [ do you really wanted to destroy us that much?] It should have been [ did you really want to destroy us that much?]
it’s shaping up quite nicely… on to the war!!!
Is there no continuation for this story? I like it too much to leave it
A typo when the leader said to Shingen [ as I thought, you!!! you hide them!] It should be either ” you hid them ” past tense, or ” you were hiding them!]
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