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This isn't a rant like yesterday but an explanation as to where the story is taking place. Will move to auxiliary after 24 hours.
So let me start by answering some comments that I've read, who expressed their concerns.
1) The villain was random and he came out of nowhere.
= I get that, but you have to understand that, there wasn't any place to do so. The first few chapters were spent explaining and developing characters and relations, and the rest were used on developing. Inside it, there wasn't any place to introduce a new villain without cause would be just weird and would feel out of place. And introducing him with cause would be another problem, since as to harm Draco who was in Hogwarts at the time, Ryan would need to Harm his family, which would cause other unnecessary problems and unhappy readers, since things like this and even subtle hints with things like netorare are a no-go in this site and for me who was building readers at the time, this would be a bad move.
There were subtle hints in the previous chapter about the villain, with Draco receiving Death threats and info on group forming, which wasn't in the original. So it wasn't completely out of the blue as well.
The whole story is mainly(with a few necessary exceptions) focused on Draco's perspective, so what Draco knows, the readers know and if Draco doesn't know something the readers wouldn't know about it as well. Things like how Draco views Ron but we all know Ron isn't completely same in the book, but Draco sees him in a bad light, that's why the readers see him in a bad light as well. The situation was supposed to be surprising to both the readers and Draco at the same time.
The timing may seem out of place but it was nearly perfect since the second volume needed plot which the main source couldn't provide this time around. And it would be way too late if I bring out the character later on as I wouldn't have time to develop the character.
Even in xianxia, people pop out of nowhere and take the mc's girlfriend to be their student or something, while the MC is just stuck there. I don't see people complaining in those novels.
2) The villains a transmigrator.
= A topic, I never thought I would have to explain because I didn't think it was such a turn off to have another transmigrator as the villain. I knew this site loved cases with OP mc and a hollow villain, but I didn't think the reaction would be this bad.
You all have to understand me in this since if I were to introduce someone more powerful and talented enough to match Draco and is someone WHO ISN'T A TRANSMIGRATOR and was already a part of the world, the story wouldn't be believable anymore. Since with Voldemort on the rise, even if there is such a person hidden somewhere in the original story, they would come out of their hiding. It just doesn't fit in with the story at all and would seem completely out of place.
I picked another transmigrator as a villain because it would be equal to someone who is a transmigrator as well. With both of them knowing the story beforehand, Draco would have to struggle with the villain, instead of completely outshining him and me using the villain as a complete stepping stone for Draco. There needs to be someone logically and be equal and stronger enough to fight the hero to keep the story going.
Things like his legs and power would be explained in the latter part as that is the part of the plot.
The only thing I will give away is that he isn't the main villain in the story.
3) Too much explanation on the letter.
= I get how people think that this character is only there for explaining things and I do admit it might seem like it due to my bad writing.
But the real purpose of me showing the letter was to show the villains character. Ryan is someone who likes to brag, gets jealous and is very petty.
I think people got the wrong tone with Ryan guessing Draco's move that he is a genius but he isn't. If you read HP before, things like this aren't too hard to guess for normal people.
Knowledge doesn't mean intelligence. Just because you remember something for the exams doesn't mean you can explain the stuff perfectly as well.
4)Draco's power.
= Again if I explain everything, it wouldn't matter in the future, so leaving out this one as well.
Again, this isn't a rant, just me trying to explain some parts of the story which could have been better explained. This is the thing with a couple of chapters a day system, It's not a book where you can read till the end and figure out how the story goes, without judging things early on. Things will go slowly and you would have to wait for things to happened and appear.
Sorry if you thought this was a chapter.
I will answer some logical questions in the comment for a couple of hours so feel free to leave some.
Please report us if you find any errors so we can fix it asap!
This isn't a rant like yesterday but an explanation as to where the story is taking place. Will move to auxiliary after 24 hours.
So let me start by answering some comments that I've read, who expressed their concerns.
1) The villain was random and he came out of nowhere.
= I get that, but you have to understand that, there wasn't any place to do so. The first few chapters were spent explaining and developing characters and relations, and the rest were used on developing. Inside it, there wasn't any place to introduce a new villain without cause would be just weird and would feel out of place. And introducing him with cause would be another problem, since as to harm Draco who was in Hogwarts at the time, Ryan would need to Harm his family, which would cause other unnecessary problems and unhappy readers, since things like this and even subtle hints with things like netorare are a no-go in this site and for me who was building readers at the time, this would be a bad move.
There were subtle hints in the previous chapter about the villain, with Draco receiving Death threats and info on group forming, which wasn't in the original. So it wasn't completely out of the blue as well.
The whole story is mainly(with a few necessary exceptions) focused on Draco's perspective, so what Draco knows, the readers know and if Draco doesn't know something the readers wouldn't know about it as well. Things like how Draco views Ron but we all know Ron isn't completely same in the book, but Draco sees him in a bad light, that's why the readers see him in a bad light as well. The situation was supposed to be surprising to both the readers and Draco at the same time.
The timing may seem out of place but it was nearly perfect since the second volume needed plot which the main source couldn't provide this time around. And it would be way too late if I bring out the character later on as I wouldn't have time to develop the character.
Even in xianxia, people pop out of nowhere and take the mc's girlfriend to be their student or something, while the MC is just stuck there. I don't see people complaining in those novels.
2) The villains a transmigrator.
= A topic, I never thought I would have to explain because I didn't think it was such a turn off to have another transmigrator as the villain. I knew this site loved cases with OP mc and a hollow villain, but I didn't think the reaction would be this bad.
You all have to understand me in this since if I were to introduce someone more powerful and talented enough to match Draco and is someone WHO ISN'T A TRANSMIGRATOR and was already a part of the world, the story wouldn't be believable anymore. Since with Voldemort on the rise, even if there is such a person hidden somewhere in the original story, they would come out of their hiding. It just doesn't fit in with the story at all and would seem completely out of place.
I picked another transmigrator as a villain because it would be equal to someone who is a transmigrator as well. With both of them knowing the story beforehand, Draco would have to struggle with the villain, instead of completely outshining him and me using the villain as a complete stepping stone for Draco. There needs to be someone logically and be equal and stronger enough to fight the hero to keep the story going.
Things like his legs and power would be explained in the latter part as that is the part of the plot.
The only thing I will give away is that he isn't the main villain in the story.
3) Too much explanation on the letter.
= I get how people think that this character is only there for explaining things and I do admit it might seem like it due to my bad writing.
But the real purpose of me showing the letter was to show the villains character. Ryan is someone who likes to brag, gets jealous and is very petty.
I think people got the wrong tone with Ryan guessing Draco's move that he is a genius but he isn't. If you read HP before, things like this aren't too hard to guess for normal people.
Knowledge doesn't mean intelligence. Just because you remember something for the exams doesn't mean you can explain the stuff perfectly as well.
4)Draco's power.
= Again if I explain everything, it wouldn't matter in the future, so leaving out this one as well.
Again, this isn't a rant, just me trying to explain some parts of the story which could have been better explained. This is the thing with a couple of chapters a day system, It's not a book where you can read till the end and figure out how the story goes, without judging things early on. Things will go slowly and you would have to wait for things to happened and appear.
Sorry if you thought this was a chapter.
I will answer some logical questions in the comment for a couple of hours so feel free to leave some.
This isn't a rant like yesterday but an explanation as to where the story is taking place. Will move to auxiliary after 24 hours.So let me start by answering some comments that I've read, who expressed their concerns.1 The villain was random and he came out of nowhere.= I get that, but you have to understand that, there wasn't any place to do so. The first few chapters were spent explaining and developing characters and relations, and the rest were used on developing. Inside it, there wasn't any place to introduce a new villain without cause would be just weird and would feel out of place. And introducing him with cause would be another problem, since as to harm Draco who was in Hogwarts at the time, Ryan would need to Harm his family, which would cause other unnecessary problems and unhappy readers, since things like this and even subtle hints with things like netorare are a no-go in this site and for me who was building readers at the time, this would be a bad move.There were subtle hints in the previous chapter about the villain, with Draco receiving Death threats and info on group forming, which wasn't in the original. So it wasn't completely out of the blue as well.The whole story is mainlywith a few necessary exceptions focused on Draco's perspective, so what Draco knows, the readers know and if Draco doesn't know something the readers wouldn't know about it as well. Things like how Draco views Ron but we all know Ron isn't completely same in the book, but Draco sees him in a bad light, that's why the readers see him in a bad light as well. The situation was supposed to be surprising to both the readers and Draco at the same time.The timing may seem out of place but it was nearly perfect since the second volume needed plot which the main source couldn't provide this time around. And it would be way too late if I bring out the character later on as I wouldn't have time to develop the character.Even in xianxia, people pop out of nowhere and take the mc's girlfriend to be their student or something, while the MC is just stuck there. I don't see people complaining in those novels.2 The villains a transmigrator.= A topic, I never thought I would have to explain because I didn't think it was such a turn off to have another transmigrator as the villain. I knew this site loved cases with OP mc and a hollow villain, but I didn't think the reaction would be this bad.You all have to understand me in this since if I were to introduce someone more powerful and talented enough to match Draco and is someone WHO ISN'T A TRANSMIGRATOR and was already a part of the world, the story wouldn't be believable anymore. Since with Voldemort on the rise, even if there is such a person hidden somewhere in the original story, they would come out of their hiding. It just doesn't fit in with the story at all and would seem completely out of place.I picked another transmigrator as a villain because it would be equal to someone who is a transmigrator as well. With both of them knowing the story beforehand, Draco would have to struggle with the villain, instead of completely outshining him and me using the villain as a complete stepping stone for Draco. There needs to be someone logically and be equal and stronger enough to fight the hero to keep the story going.Things like his legs and power would be explained in the latter part as that is the part of the plot.The only thing I will give away is that he isn't the main villain in the story.3 Too much explanation on the letter.= I get how people think that this character is only there for explaining things and I do admit it might seem like it due to my bad writing.But the real purpose of me showing the letter was to show the villains character. Ryan is someone who likes to brag, gets jealous and is very petty.I think people got the wrong tone with Ryan guessing Draco's move that he is a genius but he isn't. If you read HP before, things like this aren't too hard to guess for normal people.Knowledge doesn't mean intelligence. Just because you remember something for the exams doesn't mean you can explain the stuff perfectly as well.4Draco's power.= Again if I explain everything, it wouldn't matter in the future, so leaving out this one as well.Again, this isn't a rant, just me trying to explain some parts of the story which could have been better explained. This is the thing with a couple of chapters a day system, It's not a book where you can read till the end and figure out how the story goes, without judging things early on. Things will go slowly and you would have to wait for things to happened and appear.Sorry if you thought this was a chapter.I will answer some logical questions in the comment for a couple of hours so feel free to leave some.
