A man died young and was sent to another world with a cheat-like power!?
――But, I don’t really feel like doing anything amazing. I just want to start my own inn. Nevertheless, I’ll aim for the #1 inn in the world!!
I like the story but please don’t rush the story please
The general idea behind the story is not bad.. But sadly it’s executed in a messy way..
Some restraint would be good, it’s progressing too fast with little to no base..
Everything seems to be in a hurry.. Still, I’m going to follow it a bit..
A couple of things. I had noticed that you used the word ” cutted” when Ortashia was swinging her sword. The word should have been just ” cut”. Cut is still past tense. The second thing was when Ortashia said to Grotts [ do you really wanted to destroy us that much?] It should have been [ did you really want to destroy us that much?]
it’s shaping up quite nicely… on to the war!!!
Is there no continuation for this story? I like it too much to leave it
A typo when the leader said to Shingen [ as I thought, you!!! you hide them!] It should be either ” you hid them ” past tense, or ” you were hiding them!]
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